Hi all,
I hope you are all having a great holiday!
What have you been doing?
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Movie Making
We have been learning about making movies.
With the help of Year 6 students we have been making movies.
What have you enjoyed about the movie making?
With the help of Year 6 students we have been making movies.
What have you enjoyed about the movie making?
Wednesday, August 19, 2009
Mellons Bay School Life
We are going to make movies about Mellons Bay School Life.
What makes Mellons Bay School special?
What do you like about school?
What makes Mellons Bay School special?
What do you like about school?
Sunday, August 2, 2009
Earth and the Solar System
What facts do you know about Planet Earth or about our Solar System?
Lets build a fact file on our blog...
Lets build a fact file on our blog...
Sunday, July 19, 2009
Planet Earth and Beyond
Our topic this term is all about Planet Earth and Space.
What do you know about Planet Earth?
What do you know about Space?
We will have fun this term learning about Planet Earth and Space.
We will make some models and do some experiments.
What do you know about Planet Earth?
What do you know about Space?
We will have fun this term learning about Planet Earth and Space.
We will make some models and do some experiments.
School Holidays
Welcome back to Term 3
I hope you all had a great holiday! I went to Adelaide for a little trip, had a great time!
What did you get up to?
I hope you all had a great holiday! I went to Adelaide for a little trip, had a great time!
What did you get up to?
Sunday, June 28, 2009
Persuasive Writing
We have been learning about persuasive writing.
WALT convince the reader to agree with us.
Success Criteria:
Open with a statement about the issue being addressed.
State your position (agree/disagree) on the statement.
Create an argument – give reasons to support your opinion.
End with a summary.
Here is our first persuasive writing piece.
Written by Room 15 in Term 2 Week 8.
The Big Bad Wolf’s Trial
The wolf in no way should be jailed for his actions because he wasn’t the only one behaving badly.
The wolf’s story needs to be told to the public who will realize that he should be let free.
Firstly the pigs could also be sent to jail because they didn’t let him in. The wolf asked to be let in and gave them a chance to do it. The 3 pigs could of fed him other meats.
Secondly, wolves must eat red meat so they can survive.
Did you realize that wolves eating red meat is all a part of the food chain? It would be cruel to make the wolf starve, he needs the meat for energy and to survive. Come on, have you ever seen a wolf that is a vegetarian?
Thirdly, he shouldn’t be jailed because the cruel pigs punished him already, by making him fall into boiling water. The wolf has learnt his lesson and the next time he is hungry, he will go to the supermarket to buy some meat.
As you have heard the arguments about not jailing the wolf, you have to agree that he is innocent. He has been ignored and hated all his life. Why is it that the wolf is always the bad guy? It’s about time that the public knows the truth. We believe that he should be set free to enjoy life.
Have you been enjoying persuasive writing? Tell/Show your Mum and Dad what we have been learning...
WALT convince the reader to agree with us.
Success Criteria:
Open with a statement about the issue being addressed.
State your position (agree/disagree) on the statement.
Create an argument – give reasons to support your opinion.
End with a summary.
Here is our first persuasive writing piece.
Written by Room 15 in Term 2 Week 8.
The Big Bad Wolf’s Trial
The wolf in no way should be jailed for his actions because he wasn’t the only one behaving badly.
The wolf’s story needs to be told to the public who will realize that he should be let free.
Firstly the pigs could also be sent to jail because they didn’t let him in. The wolf asked to be let in and gave them a chance to do it. The 3 pigs could of fed him other meats.
Secondly, wolves must eat red meat so they can survive.
Did you realize that wolves eating red meat is all a part of the food chain? It would be cruel to make the wolf starve, he needs the meat for energy and to survive. Come on, have you ever seen a wolf that is a vegetarian?
Thirdly, he shouldn’t be jailed because the cruel pigs punished him already, by making him fall into boiling water. The wolf has learnt his lesson and the next time he is hungry, he will go to the supermarket to buy some meat.
As you have heard the arguments about not jailing the wolf, you have to agree that he is innocent. He has been ignored and hated all his life. Why is it that the wolf is always the bad guy? It’s about time that the public knows the truth. We believe that he should be set free to enjoy life.
Have you been enjoying persuasive writing? Tell/Show your Mum and Dad what we have been learning...
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